Bars and choruses should be captivating. For example…
“You might as well go in a corner
And sh*t on yourself…
This toilet’s mine,
So where is yours?
Oh, you can rap?
Oh, you record?
Oh, you got a song?
Oh, rhyming is your sport?
Don’t take that to the dome
We still on my home court lil (THAT WORD)…”
Now, what did he just tell you? Oaklandish 101. I love the potent satire, sarcacism, and message in this track. Kind of makes a listener instantly humble… After all, we all in this together. Right?
Listen to “Oaklandish” on SoundCloud.
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